Thursday, April 30, 2009

Childless Couples Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

the childless couple pray every day
that a child will come their way.
they tried everything to conceive
and at night, she sits and bereaves.
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louis rams
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 March 2010

Adoption is done by childless couples... and surprisingly having kids they’re too… Especially from 3rd world countries most kids [orphans] are adopted and it is Just…… where they really need affection…from both groups of couple… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Kesav Easwaran 04 May 2009

good real time story Louis...a noble and wise message well brought out here...powerful convincing...10

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Sandra Fowler 02 May 2009

A wonderful, heart warming story. If only all children could be so fortunate. Kind regards, Sandra

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 May 2009

Surely he was choosen by destiny.......................Good Write.......Surely one of your best..............

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 May 2009

Impressive write. Thought provking. Had a fabulous read.10

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lovely write sir...relatioship starts in love not in blood

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Christine Kerr 30 April 2009

Couldn't stop reading it, It was a real tear jerk-er. Hope this poem helps out a few who may be searching, well done Louis

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rago rago 30 April 2009

a heart rendering poem..........the last stanza... just give us a chance to prove youre right for you are Gods gift==this very right......a great write.

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