Childish Comments

Thanks Mike! This was purely based on real experience. Fortunately, right now me and my friend are somehow ok.

Very powerful. Raw and honest. It's almost uncomfortable to read, yet it grabs you from the beginning. Not allowing the reader to look away utill they've finished. A very believable expression of pain, sorrow, and resentment. If the roots of this poem lie in truth, and not simply imagination, I think this friendship has played its course. Move on. There will be more friends