Sunday, July 20, 2008

Childhoods End Comments

Rating: 4.9

Hollow, haunted, hurting eyes staring at
the ceiling.
Cold, hard, white tile floor a pillow
for my head.
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 April 2013

I found my early sixteens a very difficult time. Feeling write.

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Fay Slimm 16 October 2008

Description of haunting clarity - your choice of line and metre just right so the reader shudders with you. Dark but unforgettable Jim.

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Michael Grogan 04 August 2008

whispers from the dark, screams in the night calling us back calling us back

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