Hollow, haunted, hurting eyes staring at
the ceiling.
Cold, hard, white tile floor a pillow
for my head.
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Description of haunting clarity - your choice of line and metre just right so the reader shudders with you. Dark but unforgettable Jim.
whispers from the dark, screams in the night calling us back calling us back
I found my early sixteens a very difficult time. Feeling write.