Sunday, November 30, 2008

Childhoods Crushed Comments

Rating: 5.0

A little girl from beverly hills,
cried from her hotel in Rome.
For even though she had all the bills,
she had parents who were never home.
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Kathryn Marie Thurman
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Duncan Wyllie 09 December 2008

Very strong sentiment here, , well done Love duncan X

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Kathryn Byrne 07 December 2008

that was sad... but... I LOVE IT!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 December 2008

Fine wording! Fine rhyme and rhythm! Painfully beautiful! 10++

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