Saturday, December 14, 2019

Childhood, What A Cherished Song Comments

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I still remember Madhavas1 so well,
A water-hole to unwind in sweltering June,
From crusty school-fields to dusty farm-fields,
And do-nothings— morn to night's silver noon!
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 17 December 2019

We live and leave a lot behind But childhood, what a cherished song! Childhood is unquestionably the best period of one's life. When the elders look back, the carefree days come before them arousing a lot of nostalgic memories. I often long to go back to those days and have written many poems extolling childhood. Reading your poem, a lot of beautiful memories have come rushing through my mind! Thank you for sharing your reminiscences.....

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 December 2019

The biggest problem with urbanization is: we lose touch with nature. But this need not be if urbanization is planned a little better. yet, what comes in our way is greed, not only that of individuals, but also of government and civil authorities. For the last 4-5 months I am not in Baroda, but in even a bigger place Called Bangalore, and still amidst lot of nature, and I feel the difference. Thank you for the comments.

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Bharati Nayak 14 December 2019

A lot gets lost when from tired mind, How this imprint lasts for so long? We live and leave a lot behind But childhood, what a cherished song! - - - - - -A lovely poem of reminiscence - - I particularly like the line - - - -]But childhood, what a cherished song! '

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 December 2019

It is perhaps the innocence attached to childhood that makes it a cherished song. It is sad that we must lose this innocence as we grow. The culprit I think is knowledge, and do they say, innocence is bliss. Thanks for your beautiful comments.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2019

Nostalgia for childhood days is fascinatingly depicted in this beautiful poem. My favourite lines: The village was because the river was/Its life along the flowing waters flowed/From pre-bath chores and all-after/Swim and loiter till sun to zenith strode. Loved reading this fabulous poem sir.....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 December 2019

Thank you Dr Swain. Sometimes I revisit my poems of old, revise and edit or delete and upload again. This was one such. My favourite poem of childhood with a lot memories attached. My love of nature perhaps comes from this old association.

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