Sunday, January 27, 2008

Childhood's Sweet Song Comments

Rating: 3.5

Childhood forever gone
Just pleasant wisps remain
Close your eyes and remember
The bliss of young ignorance
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Indigo Rose Christman
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Brytney Moore 10 February 2009

this poem came together very well i enjoyed it

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 February 2009

A fine, fine ending to this poem. Words that might well be found in a perfect poem. Some of us find those words from time to time. The last line was worth the read. GW62

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