Sunday, October 26, 2008

Childhood Requiem (Memories Of Swings) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dappled shadows lay on
Uneven wood chips—
A nearly empty
Swingset and one
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Elizabeth Peterson
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Emily Oldham 01 November 2008

another beautiful chain of thoughts building into a poem... i love it Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Cherry Sha 27 October 2008

The memories may still be Gently touched Yet they are so Ill-disturbed..... wonderful..

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Jackie Renee 26 October 2008

'I can almost see her wings' -beautiful. You are very talented.

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