Childhood Remains Within Comments

Hi Obed, i love your poem. Once again your poem inspired me. A true apprecistion of childhood. Nice poem :)

A very excellent and poignant write! ...love to read it..Mari

‘O my friends! I can never forget those faithful years, ’ ~ This line impresses me especially the word ‘faithful’ As age advances we stay concocted and become formal Wear a cloak and mask us i.e. ‘unfaithful’ So it is better to stay glued to Childhood Memories =Truthful a.k.a Faithful … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Obed Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Yes it is hard to forget the childhood days. The total freedom from responsibilities. Good one.

That poem is very good

wow u remind me my childhood, momories never be forgeten, well said

A poem filled with truth, childhood is a time of dreams where all things impossible can become possible when believed. holding onto those memories is key to future dreams - with the knowledge to build a foundation to them.

this was an excellent write. 'As the nightingale and robin join in one chorus' reminds me of something out of a hymn to God.

Your command of English is good. (Are you really a Prince?)

very interesting poem Oded, i really appreciate the maturity of your thoughts. keep writing, you write so well.

Strong concept, writing and feeling buddy. I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the fine work. Best regards, Trade.

Thanks to Him who taught me to live and gave what I need. Now I bear the fruits of summer from being a seed! Amazing the enlightenment you have got from within and from the earth also. Beautifully expressed the eternity. Total a poem simply makes me astonished. No extra jerking of words...smooth but specific....and you have stopped your pen at the right station. Beautiful Obed.....a fantastic experience of good reading. I should stop myself here otherwise that can harm your proceeding. Bravo....write such total poetry as many as possible during a life time. Thank you much. Regards, 10/10 pranab