Childhood Pain Comments
I become stronger when I am in her presence
For even she knows that she is my quintessence
I watch her sleep trying to unveil her identity
As those pretty coloured eyes open to greet me
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This is a good poem. Though there is a line out of place near the end. I love rhythm and rhyme. This was a nice credible job of rhyming. Congratulations! GW62
Oh Wow This Is A Great Poem I Love It So Much Its So Emotional And So Real Thank You For Sharing Im Gonna Put It In My Fav Poems =D
Absolutely amazing, made me cry. Thankyou for sharing it.
this poem really touched me as i have had a terrible childhood and tried to be rid of the memories by cutting my arm, your words comforted me and really touched my heart :) x
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7/25/2025 11:39:19 AM # 1.0.0
You were right I'm in love