Thursday, January 1, 2009

Childhood Friend Comments

Rating: 4.5

Rummaging our way,
Through the school backyard,
Borrowing chalks, the ball, and
The bun from Mrs.Cook...
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar
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Niamat Ali Murtazai 04 July 2011

Good diction carries the ideas as waves carry a boat

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Kee Thampi 02 January 2009

how to write on a puppet child and deeds Sticking out our tongues at minors... Grabbing lollipops off their hands... Handing them a candy, We smirk round the corner... (A wrap around a stone...Hehe) I never felt culpable...

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 01 January 2009

friends will always be remembered when they do stuff together and they can always blame each other for doing stuff 10++++++++++++++

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The facination of childhood memories.Well written.

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Ency Bearis 01 January 2009

a friend will always be remembered..she won't be in your side if trust was nothin'

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Sarah Sisson 01 January 2009

I like the 'ain't' in there...I'm from Texas!

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Joseph Poewhit 01 January 2009

Those pranks bring back golden memo's.

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