Sunday, November 2, 2014

Childhood Dimples! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Childhood is like dimples in chubby cheeks
Looks very lovely
When dimples are filled with fun and mischief
Along with Innocent smiles and plenty of tears
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Hazel Durham 06 November 2014

The child will always be part of our very being, with such vivid imagery you explore how special childhood is for us all, a time were time doesn't count we soak up sunshine and rain with relish, as the world is not yet a dark place! Beautiful write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 04 November 2014

Innocent are the flowers and so the children and dimples that beautify the face so childhood dimples beautifies whole universe...lovely poem

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Neela Nath Das 04 November 2014

Geetha a fantastic poem on childhood.The pictorial quality is amazing.Very nice word-picture.Loved.

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Tajudeen Shah 03 November 2014

beauty to innocence and much unto the profoundness of childhood is meditated with a psychologist's mind it seems. pure expression, simple, straight and sharp that adds the authentic elegance of the craft. Even the poetic conventions have merged in oblivion owing to the facts of fitrath. God bless.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2014

Child is present in every man For its the first baby steps towards a man. In any point of time one may enjoy the child in self. Its innocence can never be forgotten ever in lifetime! A beautiful description of childhood in Geetha's own lovely style.

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Savita Tyagi 03 November 2014

A child is present in every man. life is wonderful seeing through child's eye. Loved the poem. loved the imagery and so many of those beautiful lines. Thanks for sharing. Thank you so much for your lovely comments on Yaden.

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Tadasha Tripathy 03 November 2014

Where dreams are none With the pinch of all emotions present. I liked the lines most. But the whole poem brought two drops of tears i my eye sides. It's awesome mem.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 03 November 2014

Love and cares are their hearts long for. Childhood Dimples is a truly excellent poem describing childhood emotion and poetess has presented in marvellous way. Great work.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 02 November 2014

In dimples born dreams immense.....yes childhood the very essence of life begins with fun, mischief, tears, smiles ......Geetha.....beautifully crafted.....I liked it very much.......thanks for your beautiful compliment on my writing...... but I don't think I deserve this when this world is filled with so many talents....still to you I am humbled....

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

They are like the loosened soil. Which can be moulded easily the way one want............................beautiful poem on childhood...nicely presented enjoyed

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Saheb Mohapatra 02 November 2014

a great way to explain the childhood emotions through the dimples.........outstanding imaginations...thanks

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Valsa George 02 November 2014

Childhood is like dimples in chubby cheeks Looks very lovely The very first lines arrested my attention! Dimples on chubby cheeks while smiling is a lovesome sight! Somehow I really love people with dimples! Yes Geetha, childhood is the best period of life and a child is a source of endless joy! Enjoyed!

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Kee Thampi 02 November 2014

love of nature and childish mind and we love every child to be with a play and talk Child is present in every man For its the first baby steps towards a man. In any point of time one may enjoy the child in self.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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