Sunday, February 14, 2010

Childhood Days Comments

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Let me tell you of years gone by
Eternal summers playing under bright blue skies
To cold winters with men with charcoal for eyes.
From the first day I walked adventures ensued
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Ben Littlechild
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Rose-marie Mitchell 14 February 2010

Wonderful poem, well written, nice flow. I'm always writing about my childhood. There's so much we can say about our childhood. -I like this '......Eternal summers playing under bright blue stars........To cold winters with men with charcoal for eyes......' Absolutely beautiful!

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