Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Childhood At The County Fair Comments

Rating: 5.0

Among the things enriching,
That helped to shape my life,
Was the county fair
With fond memories in rife.
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Walterrean Salley
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Joseph Anderson 07 July 2012

And a loop the loop and cheap hotdogs-great fun.I really enjoyed my trip back in time. How about A free ride on the merry-go-round

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Mohammad Muzzammil 05 November 2011

You have present a wonderful poem regarding the childhood fair and its charm. your words along with expression is quite nice, and your this stanza- Life can be fun In spite of all else. So take some time to smell the roses, And enjoy yourself I like it

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Hans Vr 28 October 2011

Fantastic write. The poem provokes very sweet memories. Very well written, Salley. You are a very good poet.

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Melancholy Man 26 October 2011

Beautiful nostalgia - very descriptive. I love it.

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Walterrean Salley

Walterrean Salley

Savannah, Ga
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