Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, January 4, 2010

Childhood Comments

Rating: 4.7

I was unable to read and understand
What were papa up to and his stand?
When he will be angry or loose temper?
When he will embrace me or pamper?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Kevin Patrick 08 January 2022

A fascinating view of your childhood, it is a beautiful honest account of the highs and lows experience, there are always sweet memories to look back on. Greatly enjoyed!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 January 2022

Beautiful poem about a beautiful time in one's life Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 January 2022

In her warmth I could feel bright day She was almost there to show the way.............Beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2015

Endless Hope Old memories of childhood are always unforgetful Unlike · Reply · 1 · 7 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2015

welcome yasir ahmed Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Kelvin Karani 05 July 2012

This is beautiful! Ah, now the persona really comes out convincing...great poem there! And I also love the language used...simple, just like a child would. Read me here and ourwordsourvoices(dot) blogspot(dot) com

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Louis Rams 18 January 2010

childhood memories will last forever, it can not get any better. when you remember the strength of both in their different ways. gr8888t write

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Sejal Kapadia 17 January 2010

wonderful piece of writing....10

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Merna Ibrahim 08 January 2010

What a beautiful presentation to the role of the parents! I agree with the ideas in this poem as the idea of the influence of the childhood in human's life. Great Work :) 10++

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Aira Olayvar 05 January 2010

It is the frame of our being… since childhood we are being mould. In my case, I used to hate my father and so to say, I can relate on your affection with your mother… she stand for us, for me and my siblings… and it made us who we are… a good lady I can say…

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 05 January 2010

kudos mr hasmukh! kudos...

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 January 2010

I admire your courage and frankness in writing this nad it gives us a picture of parenting from the eyes of a child. Thank you for sharing! 10+++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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