Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Childhood Comments

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Boots slide across frozen puddles
Crystal splinters
Old air exhaled, before new.
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andrew cormack
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Hikari Enma 28 September 2009

sad but true. messaged conveyed clearly. i like the way it was written. unparalleled.

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Marilyn Lott 16 September 2009

This is rather sad, Andrew. Typical of a kid's first day of school but I hope Mum wasn't gone forever! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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