Friday, May 30, 2008

Childhood Comments

Rating: 4.6

Memories of childhood prattle sweet,
Strange, funny utterances incomplete;
Toddling walk on the faltering feet,
Falling down, the same to repeat.
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Elena Sandu 07 April 2010

The memories of childhood sweet or sour, Make a person bloom as crimson flower; Lovely poem, lovely lines..and true! ! Wish I could give a hundred of 10's..you have to deal with only one, sorry..

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

When I think of the affectionate bower, I feel as fresh as if I just had a shower. Rachel Ann Butler

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Ruth Walters 20 August 2009

What beautiful sentiment C.P. I especially the last line in the last verse, very descriptive. A smashing poem this. Ruthy: -D

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rago rago 11 May 2009

memoirs of life always rejunevate us.........and childhood rememberances a great tonic to live............in what ever form the rememberance is always like green leaf.... a beautiful piece of memory.......

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 February 2009

wow sir.......such a delightful piece......those childhood days will remain engraved in our hearts forever......thanks for writing this.

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Atsiylah Garfinkel 06 February 2009

A delightful piece! I enjoyed the easy read, and found it invoked my own childhood memories! Very well written! 10/10

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Salu Salu 14 January 2009

the cycle of childhood rolls over all universal landslides... everyone everywhere more or less same...your sweet memoir brings good attention to persuade me to look into mine for a moment........thanks for sharing/salu

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Bonnie Collins 25 December 2008

Oh C.P. I trully enjoyed this.. How innocent can this be? I enjoyed the line about the mom's lemonade, it took me back to the days of my youth in the hot summer, and such a treat to have mom's lemonade... This was trully good.... Bonnie

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 November 2008

'childhood' makes my mind re connect to the past...my childhood days.....though i havent really experienced those things children loves playing..but i love your poem...it helped me find out that there's no more heartaches of being born as an Only child..having a very protective parents....thanks for your piece...sir... my 10+++for this....

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Ashley Ormon 06 October 2008

Amazing diction. I love the way you structured this poem, and how you depicted the ways of childhood.10+

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Linda Weischedel 05 October 2008

I like the last part of your poem. Great job, I enjoyed it. If only we could go back for a little bit. Re-living our childhoods

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Sandra Fowler 10 June 2008

Thank you for sharing your warm memories with your readers. The last stanza is especially appealing. Warm regards, Sandra

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Onelia Avelar 30 May 2008

Ah, sweet, subliming memories of childhood - lovely revived here...

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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