Monday, February 17, 2020

Childhood Comments

Rating: 5.0

Childhood

There is a child inside
abandoned - for him
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Soran M. H
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Sandra Feldman 14 November 2022

What a Marvelous poem! So intense and wonderful in its truth, sentiments and poetic beauty.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 December 2021

A poetic gem that will always, always touch the heart.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 December 2021

We are blessed that we can understand poetry. We can feel and see the true meaning of life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 December 2021

One of the best poems I have read on childhood. Soran's poetry has always that magic that will grip /lure a reader to revisit his works.

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Bharati Nayak 30 October 2021

There is a child inside-----who wishes only for a bike to ride the rainbow's road and never come down - but time will not lend him a hand---What a stunning poem!

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Chinedu Dike 18 April 2021

An insightful and profound philosophical reflection.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 November 2020

We are confused between dream and realitty The poem mirrors the truth

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Lee Boueri 05 November 2020

Lovely poem. There's a child in all of us.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 25 September 2020

The child inside the poet is Artistically brought forward

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Sandra Feldman 22 September 2020

I have not enough words to praise this poem. Its inner tenderness and childlike innocence is so well expressed and beautified, so far reaching in tenderness that every time I read it, I will cry. The happiness to know that innocence and poetry still can be a lifelong guide. Thank you so much for this unforgettable and marvelous creation.

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Anjandev Roy 30 August 2020

This is a profound piece......Thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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Soran M. H 27 August 2020

Dear poet and critic Rose thanks for reading and enjoying this humble poem, ....you are right, the childhood is the hidden side in our personalities, time to time it comes on to the surface without our demand, in some events or special moment when we are struggling and feeling weak or losing the contact with the awkward reality, take care and always be on the top

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2020

The pains and fears will always stay in us invading our senses. Liked the three closure lines, to wit; " the child inside me never stops crying is always hungry." Powerful and beautiful lines of a great poem.10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2020

A perceptive and thought provoking poem. The memories we gathered in our childhood form part of our being embedded in our very core. The joys we experienced in life as a child will always linger in our mind and we wish it will never end..

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Soran M. H 10 August 2020

Dear Mahtab, really your generous commentary encouraging me to write better, kind regards

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

In our character childhood is hidden lovingly. Childhood emotion, sense of humor, ideology keep growing up in us till the end breath; your poem is crafted the theme of childhood in the old age very acutely....pleasure to read

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Soran M. H 06 August 2020

Dear poet Valsa George hello, your comment is very true, thanks you for your time reading and commenting on my humble poem, take care

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Valsa George 06 August 2020

Yes, there is a child in each one of us. The older we grow, the child in us never dies. Only after crossing sixty, I have realized this! Each grown up has fears, longings and wants.... may be a little different from that of children. The child in us alone sustains our curiosity, innocence and zest for life. Fortunate are those who keep the child alive in them. A beautiful write unraveling a great truth! Full marks!

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Soran M. H 25 June 2020

Thank you Aarzoo Mehek, that is the nature of human being, I hope you have enjoyed it, regards

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Aarzoo Mehek 25 June 2020

May the child inside you never fade. Beautiful poem Soran,

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