Thursday, October 25, 2012

Childhood Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! My dear childhood!
I can never forget the day
When you came to me
Your soft footsteps
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manaswini dash
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

but when I wanted to come nearer I didn't know Why you went far and far away? The tragedy...the separation from the most loved.. the pain, so beautifully expressed. The poem gives a sense of first rains after the hot summer days. Thanks poetess. You are going to excel in this art of poetry. 10++++ for it. Regards. Subhas

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