Child's Sleep Complaint (The Moonlight Serenade) Comments

Gentle little epigram. I agree with Ez, it certainly could have been written by Spike. The sky is full of holes to let the rain in but the holes are very small that's why rain is thin. Clever lad. I love it. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Great. Don't know why but it reminded me of Spike Milligan. Ez

still one of my favorites............................

Chuck, Awwww....this one was sweet, very touching. Hugs, Dee

Sweet and simple, I love this! Warm wishes, Justine.

Chuck, Chuck, Chuck. Shit hot, as ever.

Beautiful, great metaphores! Elya Thorn

A beautiful image! Sincerely, Mary

You have caught the purity of a child before they are messed up with imposed language!

They say that poets are seven times as likely to be synaesthetic I wonder if synaesthetes are seven times as likely to be poets