Child's Play Comments

Love can come in all kind of shade, very beautifully explained everything about children's play. Nice job really.

'They're color blind in each and every way In love and peace or come whatever may' - Loved these lines. A true observation that can be emulated by the elders. 'Learning from them we can unite as one Child's play goes on until the day is done ' - Yes, we can learn from them. A nice poem indeed.

Learning from them we can unite as one I hope this one line is followed by everyone. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

........a beautiful poem....I wish we could be a child forever....

Children never discriminate.... they are colour blind! They unite together forgetting rank and status! It is so energizing to watch children at play! Let the children open the eyes of elders to shed their cold formalities and rigid reserve! Enjoyed this free flowing poem!

This is a nice children piece and I like the sing-song beat, if flows smoothly and easily even though the meter or beat changes in the stanzas.