Friday, May 29, 2009

Child Predators Aftermath Comments

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his sexual desires and fantasies he could not control
this is what the police were told.
castration! is what we should do
but it's not up to me or you.
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Christine Kerr 30 May 2009

I really enjoy your writes on taboo subjects Louis. Not everyone can pull it off so gracefully. I'm sure it takes a strong mind to think above the norm to speak without negative emotions on such sore subjects and you do it with a smoothness of such grace. I commend you for that Louis. Got one up your sleeve on ATI SOCIAL BEHAVIOUR. A Big 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 May 2009

Poetry is to make a reader think and has a poet you had achieved it.

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Sandra Fowler 29 May 2009

A strong subject. Many questions, but so few answers. You are to be commended for this thought provoking write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Heather S 29 May 2009

very true indeed a predators mind can never be changed, no matter what i have learned this the hard way

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a good remedy..it is more than cancer...nice piece with a wit to it

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