Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Child Of Poverty Comments

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It's so strange.
They speak about it.
Pizza! burgers! chicken! meat!
I don't know what 'delicious' means!
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Kakali 01 September 2019

Thats really true

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PRIYANI KUMARI 11 February 2019

U CAN IMPROVE YOUR WORDS

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 11 September 2013

Great poem with so much truth.

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Shraddha The Poetess 08 September 2013

poverty is one of the biggest economic problem and also a social problem...this poem is not onlyy touchyy but also consists dvotion and sympathy towards children suffering from a disease called povertyyy......wrking like cancer which actually need cure and medication....... although very nice poetryy bhaiya..........

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 August 2013

pauvréte! The poverty and the humans, the poverty and nothing the poverty and disaster. The world and the emerge of no one who sees the children on the rims of cliff or the people with Realism_dialectick way of living. The more they get, the enermous amount of disaster and poverty will spreat in a vast scale Bea bro

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G Tausif 21 August 2013

Very touching poem. Very well written

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Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

written with good imagery you draw the reader into your poem. we feel the sadness of the child. this should never happen to the children 88423

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Nader Baheri 17 August 2013

wonderful my friend.it have very good rhyme and subject. once a sophisticated man told me we must eat best food and drink the best beverage.sleep in best and comfortable beds.and also live in the best and super expensive houses.i wondered and i asked him what if we dont have enough money and what if we are poor. then he replied.if we get hungry enough, our food is the best and the most delicious food.if we get thirsty enough what we drink is the best beverages.if we get tired enough our bed is the most comfortable bed.and finally if we love each other and everyone our world would be the most and super expensive house. i dont know maybe what these words seem motto.i didnt believe in it too but now i am understanding what he said. felicitous.~nb

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R.benjamin Abate 14 August 2013

This is a good write. Describing difficult times in one's life and harsh memories.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 August 2013

Poverty has always brought the sadness and difficulty, but we have to try to get up and fix it even God can not do anything if we do not start first good imagery and well wtitten

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