Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Child Of My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Child of my life
Close your eyes
Sleep tight
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Dave Alan Walker
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Mervyn Graham 20 March 2014

yup... I had to give this a simple 10/10... I feel your loss

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 July 2013

every word of this poem resonates with unfathomable sadness!

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Louise Crielly 18 March 2012

so strong and powerfull

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 21 February 2012

it is a great poem... true poem... it`s awful when we lose people by us... especially if they are our children...

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Jinal Oswal 27 September 2011

You have indeed a lot of emotions unexplained yet! Your writings show the part that is so emotional and full of thoughts. You are amazing! You take people to a different world by your writing, a world which has many stories. We can always wish for the best for everyone in this world....

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Akingbehin Daniel Murphy 19 September 2011

dis is 9ice work.i love dat so much

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Debra Martin 18 September 2011

I know this was a very painful experience, but I personally believe this beautiful child is in Heaven playing and dancing with the 'Angels'. May God bless the mother with another chance to love His gift of a child...

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Unwritten Soul 12 September 2011

The flow just like a tear from eyes.....contains emotion and feeling...i like this very much... DOnt cry this world just a short time, not so real life...soon we will have the real one, shed your sadness from dropping... the memory will keep there for you and who on the road :) _Unwritten Soul

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Vanessa Hughes 09 September 2011

Makes me want to cry, really sad. I hope justice prevails one day. nessy x

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