Sunday, June 17, 2007

Child Of Mine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who else can make me happy when all around is gloom
Who brings a smile to my darkest day and brightens up a room
Who fills my days with chatter and never wants to go to bed
Who can drive me to distraction and then wants a hug instead
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Michelle Garner
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David Harris 17 June 2007

Michelle, what a beautiful poem. The rhythm and the rhyme just glided through this piece. One line easily following the next. So simple and so easily. Top Mark from me. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem that is so heartfelt. David

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