'I Love You, Baby, ' you recite mechanically,
never parting eyes from paper, the 'baby'
always snagging as if thinly veiling 'but..'.
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Lori, This is an excellent poem. You left some skin in this one. Very well crafted work. A pleasure to read you. Carolynn
I love your flower-petal fingers, always use them to write your poetry! !
Another intrestin poem (another referrin to the 'hamster' one) . That's a very sophisticated and idiosyncratic technique you got.
i've enjoyed it Lori, the rollcall made me laugh a bit at the end, i felt also compassion for the children and the father, next time tell me what the children have becomen... cheers Albert