Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Child Of Destiny Comments

Rating: 5.0

My impuissance always haunted me like a nightmare,
I always stood alone even in a busy fair
My thoughts ghosted me like a vulture looking for its prey,
Even my spirit was bemused when indulged with life in a woozy fray
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SREEJITH KULAPARAMBIL
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Abnish Singh Chauahan 13 May 2010

BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSIONS

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Excellently expressed/powerfully presented.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2009

Life has now bestowed me with all the blessings, I could see today the compassion of all beings Life is only meant for love and sharing, This is the only testament that could free the spirit from wearing..life is to belived withjoy andhappiness.. you may enjoy when love it...beautiful write and good piece of writing....10 read mine....silent spectator

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Kesav Easwaran 11 October 2009

a long poem...reflective and poignant...meditatory in style...much soul-searching is seen done...and the light at the end of the tunnel visible there...good work...10

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