I am just an innocent child
Yet you feed me your wild
Ideas of a deranged uncle
unaware of what you were playing
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this reminds me of my poem broken home and the abuser check them out.
how sad, how frightening people like them should burn to hell your poem depicts reality
Very powerful. I feel your pain. Read my poem innocence lost.
the subject of your poem depicts that you have gone through this. i like the way it was put together, , simple words were used yet it gives a great impact. great!
My heart goes out to you - may God heal your hurts - a very honest poem