Child Logic Comments

Many things to learn from kids.

Two days in a row The Modern Poem Of The Day? Congratulations!

Weirdly excellent slice of adolescent life, I love it.

NOTE: I do hope my comments will stay here. Excellent poem.5 Stars. Congratulations!

I do not see my comment for this Modern Poem Of Today. Congratulations. Hurt finger, much blood and of course very painful, indeed a child's logic.5 Stars! Excellent poem!

Eerie occurrences, but an excellent poem, well conveyed.

Sad poem about a kid's doing, lost her finmger, blood everywhere, eerie expression but an excellent poem 5 Stars! Congrats with being The Modern Poem Of The Day!

I wanted to write 'like her, I too am so scared! ' The r from 'her' got inadvertently dropped.

'She stayed in the bush till sundown, wrote in blood on the logs, and gripped her gapped hand, afraid' - like he, I too am so scared!

A gapped hand is very painful for an, the more for a smallest girl. This is awful. It is always the wrong doing of an. Poet of Ayers Rock, this is not right to blame the small girl.

She stayed in the bush! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

what her parents would say to waste of a finger. Carelessness. Mad kids. She had done wrong some way........touching expression. Beautiful poem.

Very nice. Enjoyed the poem.

Mad kids, done wrong, beautiful write

She stayed in the bush till sundown, wrote in blood on the logs, and gripped her gapped hand, afraid excellent great 10++++++++++++++++++