Child Like Spirit Comments

I love the sincerity in this poem, everyone takes the world for granted, missing out on lifes little pleasures, the soft swish of the wind, a small cotton cloud in a vast sky of blue, very very beautiful i love your poetry

Very lovely. I love the simplicty and sincerity of this work of art. Thank you for sharing.10+++ from me! ! Sincerely, Paige

i like this poem for it's spirit...i think the child who comes here is a grown up from somewhere...i take this poem inti my favs

This is a common call to appreciate the things of life. A wonderful thought to put on paper. The presentation of this was clear and direct. That was good. The ending was fair. A simple call to question. Not bad. All in all, a rather average but pleasant poem to read. That's not bad either. GW62