Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 22, 2013

Child Is No More Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes, still inside womb and died
Hopes never turned alive
It was pure case of new birth
But taken over by death
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2013

Re: Child is no more (Score: 1) by AsIf on Friday, August 23,2013 (04: 48: 15) Weird syntax and missing articles make this difficult and tedious

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Poetheart Morgan 22 August 2013

Painful Poet! ! ! ! I prefer no comment, I cant.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

Good write Timo ryan17 minutes ago nice Comment +1 needs work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

Jean Gorney15 minutes ago therapeudic

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 August 2013

Yes, still inside womb and died Hopes never turned alive

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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