Thursday, August 4, 2011

Child In Your Arms Comments

Rating: 4.5

Child in your arms
Will always love you

Child in your arms
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Dave Alan Walker
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Charity Nduhiu 22 July 2015

Child in your arms will always love you. This is so touching. Sweet poet.

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Mervyn Graham 20 March 2014

I can hear your bluesman singing this... love it

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Ashleigh Mellon 16 March 2012

Your Poem Touched my heart, mate, I invite you to read Let The World Gracefully Shine Again Ode to Michael Jackson Heal The World Tears Of An Autistic Woman And He's Out Of My Life Once again, Beautiful Poem, It is well written.

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Ashleigh Mellon 16 March 2012

Your Poem Touched my heart, mate, I invite you to read Let The World Gracefully Shine Again Ode to Michael Jackson Heal The World Tears Of An Autistic Woman And He's Out Of My Life Once again, Beautiful Poem, It is well written.

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Karen Deeks 10 March 2012

This had me in tears... My friend went through this two years ago and seeing her and her other halfs pain as they said goodbye was something I'll never forget.. Mother father watch over me And jesus will watch over you ... Thank you Karen

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Joyce Vajda 09 March 2012

I enjoyed your child in your arms poem. I know that by reading this it was a devine inspiration. Bless you and I look forward to reading more of your wonderful inspiring poems..Bless you Joyce

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James William 11 December 2011

no words could describe this poem

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Ruth Walters 01 November 2011

This reads like a song....very heartfelt and passionate

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Jacqui Broad 24 October 2011

This is a song you've written, yes? I didn't want to read it for a long time, because of the title. I was right, it made me sad. Because I think you've lost a child, before you had Lilly... It touched a chord, for sure...

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Jinal Oswal 27 September 2011

So touching, it shows the care, the love that binds us with our parents.... :) Its truly touchy

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Jade Ali 27 September 2011

So beautiful and touching...

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CB Carlos 22 September 2011

written from the heart.. I can feel the emotions in it. Nicely done. :)

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Winston Harding 18 September 2011

Feel your words. Wonderful!

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Debra Martin 18 September 2011

So very sweet yet tender too....

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

Your poetry is quite lyrical, I can admire that, you do a good job of it. This is very touching, as always, you inspire emotion.

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Unwritten Soul 12 September 2011

You repeating this lines double each time: Child in your arms Will always love you That show how deep love a child to the ones who raise him...Dave, there's something is visible by this hidden soul in your writing...I can sense the energy of it (Unwritten Soul can detect any soul talking hahaha joking) ...but the moving lines really beautiful made..well done_Unwritten Soul

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Shadow Girl 12 September 2011

very powerful, very touching, very sad. Beautifully written with pain and love.

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Claudia Krizay 09 September 2011

another very powerful, very sad- a profoundly moving poem

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Claudia Krizay 09 September 2011

A moving, beautiful write-

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