Wednesday, September 28, 2016

Child Birth Comments

Rating: 4.9

Child birth

She knew everything
About us; awake or deep asleep.
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Leela Chatterjee 20 March 2019

The world is changing very fast.No doubt, Google is taking our time. But we enjoy our time.

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Bharati Nayak 19 February 2017

Our wisdom was passing from generation to generation.From mother to child.Parents were our guide.We were looking to them for advice.Love was the binding force.Now people search net for knowledge.Machine replacing human beings'- - - - Human touch is missing- - - - -Congratulations for being selected Poet of the Day.

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Christina Simmons 19 February 2017

This write had me towards the end in fits of laughter! Honestly one can't take anything too seriously otherwise the whole play will drive you barmy! ! ! Well done for gaining recognition for the day.

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Indira Renganathan 19 February 2017

Thoughtful concept....a well crafted poem

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Chinedu Dike 19 February 2017

Insightful narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Nassy.

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Clarence Prince 19 February 2017

How very nice: For darkness she was light For our nights torch, candle. Thanks for sharing!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 February 2017

Nice expression of reality on cyber life... congrats on being chosen....

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 February 2017

Its really pathetic, how the normal human life is robbed of all essences by the technology. Very well expressed thought provoking poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Allport 19 February 2017

an interesting poem of birth and rebirth and what they entail?

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Kim Barney 19 February 2017

The Internet can be wonderful or terrible, depending on how you use it. Many people do spend too much time online instead of having real lives. Very nice poem and congratulations on poem of the day!

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Richard Wlodarski 19 February 2017

You have so profoundly captured the essence of humanity vs. technology. Empathy vs. indifference. It moved me greatly. Beautiful poem that is very worthy of Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Nassy. I think that you might like some of my poetry esp. Mother. I invite you to my writings.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 February 2017

Giving birth to children. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 February 2017

The stanza summarizes how time has changed. Internet has become the passion with young and old and the human touch to our relationship is vanishing. Nice write.thanks for sharing and Congrats.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 19 February 2017

She knew everything About us; awake or deep asleep. A well expressed piece of poem. Sylva.

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