Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Child And Mother Comments

Rating: 4.0

Child
Mom! Stars which lying on the sky,
Twinkling they are as they be shy,
Stare they sportive at me, it seems,
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Heather Wilkins 26 May 2013

a lovely conversation between child and mother. beautifully written

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Rafiq Sandeelvi 02 July 2011

meaningful and nice work.I appreciate your poetic vision.

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Tanvi Damle 15 March 2011

this poem s really very meaningful n truly beautiful, i luvd it :)

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 16 February 2011

spoke as if frome the child and mother. mark 10, shan

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Amy Marie 09 December 2010

Pretty good and interesting :)

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Mohammad Tabish Hussain 11 November 2010

I like this poem...it is very well written and and very poetic....well done.

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

Bahraich, India
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