Tuesday, June 14, 2016

Child Abuse Comments

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It's CHILD ABUSE I'm screaming out loud!
The cry in the night when there's no one out
Kids don't speak it because of the fright
But they cry it alone throughout the night
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Soha Zidan
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Mysterious Writer 333 09 November 2016

I don't understand why some children can't lead a life full of joy and happiness. Why do innocent children suffer from such cruelty? Why on earth are there people out there who ruin a child's life just because of their personal problems? It's unfair... Anyways, a beautiful poem you have written for it describes the harsh life of an abused child and that other beings - who lead a so-called 'normal' life - can hardly do anything to give them what they truly want/need. The message was indeed wonderful and I myself enjoyed reading it. Thank you!

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Tom Billsborough 14 June 2016

And the theft of childhood. What a wonderfully expressed poem this is. Tom Billsborough

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Soha Zidan 14 June 2016

It is truly heartbreaking, Tom. A problem with no solution! Thanks for your kind comment.

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