Child Comments

Yes sir, I totally agree with you! A value laden piece of work!

A very sincere poem written in childlike innocence.

Pl. respect grammar.

You have very good, very wise thoughts, Hasmukh. As a native English speaker, I would suggest not trying too hard to force rhymes though. Your thoughts and feelings stand well enough on their own. Thank you for sharing your poem, Sir. Peace.

really good write! ! i enjoyed reading it :)

Oh kid! “Neither get afraid, Not you get laid, Obey what is said, More attention paid, ” Nice thoughts… if only our young ones will be guided the most, this in-turn will be realized for sure.

fully captures childhood, which i myself have all rights to say(:

A very enlightening poem.. i appreciated the manner in which you ordered around conventional words of wisdom of which you do so well. this is a 10+++, too

this is a really good write...! !

Hello lovely kid, You may always lead, This is a lovely template for a school classroom it is full of steps for the right path great work here! ++++++++10 regards hasmukh

Must be walled in Nursery School. Ten++ for teaching child conduct... Sir. Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

worthy advices Daddy! ! ! the early years remain the best period... I enjoyed it...

child is star attraction infamily....10

future of our country as well...10

child is considered as love symbol....10

without kid home is not called home....10

something like toy infamily....10

beautiful to see child in home.....10

the joys of child.. elegant to read a well written piece.

make our home happy....10