Friday, April 14, 2006

Chickens And Similees Comments

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unhatched
like a little chicken whose feathers are stuck to the inside of his shell
he'll never live to see a day
if he dosent endure the small pain
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aeda sea
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Sidi Mahtrow 14 April 2006

Interesting. What I like about similes is that the reader can put which ever spin on it that he or she likes. Could it be That this poem is about something that you can't quite see, A world confused, in which one tries to blame Others for one's own endless shame.(?) You got it right about incubators and the effect of humidity. sidi

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