Chickened Out Comments
Bri Edwards has lost his last hen,
so it's time to go buy some again.
With his hens he will play,
while he hopes they will lay.
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It would be wise for Bri not to keep chickens or to shift to a safer place.
Bharati, thank you for commenting. I, for one, would LOVE to live where Bri lives!
Bri's safe as a mouse when in his house, but when outside he must beware of the bear!
It's yet another 'stunning' (perhaps in MORE than one way) poem. And it's a fine limerick; I counted the 'syllables' to be sure. AND it has humour/humor, though not all may agree.
Oh, Kim, another brilliant poem, based on (part of) the life of Bri; that's ME! ! And partly on the death of the departed hens, may they rest in peace (RIP) . Thay ALREADY have rested in pieces. : ) : ((
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7/29/2025 2:02:17 PM # 1.0.0
I guess you need more than chicken wire to keep out a black bear! A great limerick and nice picture!
Thanks, Ron. I appreciate the comment.