Tuesday, November 27, 2018

Chicken Or Egg? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chicken or egg - what came first?
Can't find an answer that will quench my thirst.
"Of course, " said the chicken, "it was me.
Without me, how could the egg ever be? "
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AiR - Atman in Ravi
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Susan Williams 28 November 2018

Enjoyed this immensely! ! ! ! ! I liked how the form of repetition emphasized the round and around of the thesis! Very good piece of writing! ! ! 10

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Airatmaninravi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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