Thursday, May 7, 2009

Chicken Of The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a fish on hook
She reels me in
I fight for my freedom,
But the line gets tighter,
...
Read full text

Alyssa Long
COMMENTS
Saadat Tahir 18 May 2009

hi alyssa i beg to differ from previous comment...there is more here than meets the eye...these are painful unwitting ramblings of a soul caught on the wrong hook...wrong foot? ? very nice write cheers

0 0 Reply
Surya . 13 May 2009

a very eemotional poem. beautifull lines. maintained the suspense. posted 10 surya

0 0 Reply
Sam Fitts 09 May 2009

I love that last line, kill me quickly instead of disembowelment with a dull knife

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success