Chicken Comments

Chicken or just cry-baby? Pain can be fun! No pain is WAY too dull...so is death.

i really do understand where youre coming from here... i once wet down that route.: / well done, , great write x

If the world can fall to the knees of one man, begging and pleading for leadership, how do you think they would react, knowing that he leads them for the love of a woman. Yes i just made that up, but the point to it is that, every person has a point to existence, nothing is simple, and yet knowing only complicates things, There is nothing splendid about death, nothing great, there is no freedom in it. As far as the writing goes, I wouldn't say specifically that it was great, It's too... common. (no offense) Death is a complicated things, thus if you write about death, the symbolism should be complicated as well, so as to correctly respresent the possilities that life lacks and death could hold. I would give it a 7 out of 10 if i had to judge it, However i am not a judge, for i will one day be judged.