Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Chiaroscuro Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shadows now cast east
With somber grays quaking on the grass
It seems only a while t’ was noon
And the sun shone bright
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Eddie Roa
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Eddie Roa 14 January 2009

Have checked it. see my comments.

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Ency Bearis 13 January 2009

nice vivid imagery write..well penned...a have similar words I used in my poem titled Afterglow...you can check it what is all about...10

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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