Chhod Kar (Urdu) Comments
Senche jo apna gulshan e atfal chhod kar.
Khush khush wo chal diey hamen har sal chhod kar.
Phoolon ki pattiyon ko sanwara he umr bhar.
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I always love to read Urdu Ghazal. Melodious! Soothing to heart. Please read poem Badder ala Shayar(ਬਾੱਡਰ ਆਲ਼ਾ ਸ਼ਾਯਰ)
Last lines made me smile and I said to myself arey way mujhe bhi ya Rab beghair sawaal jawab Ke kaash. Zabardast shairi wah, I liked ESP bulbul line as well. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "
Dear poetess! I am astonished to see Urdu words in your lovely comments. Thanks for it and your invitation as well.
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7/21/2025 11:53:40 PM # 1.0.0
Phoolon ki pattiyon ko sanwara he umr bhar. Aandhi men ham ne apne par o bal chhod kar. Bulbul ka hal dekhiey karta he tarbiyat. Bijli ki zad pe apne wo amwal chhod kar. Lajawab ghazal. Ye do sher bohot umda hai. Dheron daad..
Dear Arzoo Mehek! Apke alfaaz ka shukria.