Thursday, July 24, 2008

Chez Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loneliness and bitterness
fill her empty shell

Her lying words of love
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 April 2013

good metre. Enjoyed.

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Ophelia Payne 11 August 2008

Ah the joys of being a loveing father.

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Fred Babbin 11 August 2008

Such rhythm, such hurt!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 06 August 2008

i dont think anyone could have done a better job at tenderly, regretfully describing the hurtful darkness in a near one's nature.amzing! ....

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Fay Slimm 29 July 2008

So well written and so descriptive of raw truth that I feel a shudder of pity for you both. Love is all - forever. Greetings from Cornwall. U.K.

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