Friday, July 1, 2016

Cheryl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweating in the summer Sun of Dubai
My shopping trolley overloaded
I struggled at my building door
When she, a kid of hardly seven
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Susan Williams 03 October 2016

Isn't life loverly? ? ? ? ? ? There you are, engaged in a humdrum experience, when a sparkling drop of beauty plops itself on your day and sprinkles it with a million magic drops that will stay with you till the day you die. 10++++++++++

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Thanks for the encouragement and 10. I was to Mt. Rainier the day before and have written a poem about it, captioned Mount Rainier. Would like you to read it as theme relates to your State of Wa.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 July 2016

What an inspirational poem! A child's vision might surpass an elder's. The little girl is full of passion to do great things. Such noble sentiments in a child are praise-worthy. Hope she will live her dream and dispense knowledge to the under-privileged children. A heart-touching poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2016

Yes mother land is definitely very fortunate. This poem has brad vision and really feeling of memory is well shared here. Very nicely penned poem this is...10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 July 2016

Blessed is Cheryl and blessed is the land. Beautiful narration that will inspire others.

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Vijayakumaran Nair 05 July 2016

Dear Rajettan, I had missed you for some time. I hope that Cheryl's innocence will stay through out her life. Her wish came out of her desire to help the needy. My best wishes for this child for pursuing her dream, whether it be a teacher, doctor or social worker. Beautiful poem! !

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Valsa George 05 July 2016

Such a sweet poem on a sweet child....! 'As I stood behind her Struggling to hold back tears Of joy - a wasteland of seventy Dwarfed by a mere tiny seven'........... These lines tell all your admiration for her....! I am proud she wishes to pursue my profession!

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Jaishree Nair 04 July 2016

A lovely poem..could feel the constriction in my throat while reading this.God bless this child and children like this make us believe that there is still hope for humanity.Your lines are vibrant with emotions Thanks for sharing. Good to have you back ji...

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Kelly Kurt 01 July 2016

She sounds like a special child, and no doubt has special parents.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

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