Monday, January 27, 2014

Cherry Petals Comments

Rating: 3.3

Last day of May
The sun keeps spoiling me
with a long waited warm feel
I slowly walk on the broken asphalt
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Elena Sandu
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2017

With laughter! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

A natural write of slightly erratic form which follows perfectly our many racing thoughts and emotions. Maybe the little bug wrote a poem about its day in May where the wind unkindly blew it into a red haired human and how it survived being flicked away and it too later laughed with the wind. :)

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