Cherry blossoms blooming
during a hot spring day.
Seeing you and her,
really hurt me to the core.
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You said it! It's so true that it's an unbearable thought to stay in love with somebody who loves somebody else. This poem expresses that beautifully. The cherry blossoms also fill my senses, by the way :)
A nice, sweet and tender poem! ! ! I love the way the sadness of a lover it's described through the poetry.The beautiful words that are used to talk and to describe the most deep inner feelings.The last line finishes the poem in such a great way: 'Look on the floor, the wind has blown the petals of lovelessness away.' Great job! ! ! Keep Writing! !
I hope you found relief when the wind blew away the petals of lovelessness.
Felt like the song someone like youby Adele.. Really touching..