The crimson sun fails to rise
On the eastern shore of my demise,
Waters ebb through space and time,
And everybody sees through crystal eyes,
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Cherries does not exactly do this poem justice Mathew, it is very good and it flows beautifully down the pain, couldn't find anything wrong with it at all! lol An open heart is a loving heart, springs to mind though! Just to be positive for a change! lol 10 Cherries from grinning at you, happy Tai
I like it. The title draws you in, and the poem holds its own. A 10. -Lydia
WOW! amazing, stupendous, im outta words! That's a very nice poem there Matt keep up the good work!