Wednesday, May 10, 2006

Cherries Comments

Rating: 3.0

The crimson sun fails to rise
On the eastern shore of my demise,
Waters ebb through space and time,
And everybody sees through crystal eyes,
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Mathew Lewis
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Eden Sheffroth 16 May 2006

WOW! amazing, stupendous, im outta words! That's a very nice poem there Matt keep up the good work!

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***** ********* 10 May 2006

Cherries does not exactly do this poem justice Mathew, it is very good and it flows beautifully down the pain, couldn't find anything wrong with it at all! lol An open heart is a loving heart, springs to mind though! Just to be positive for a change! lol 10 Cherries from grinning at you, happy Tai

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Lydia Francese 10 May 2006

I like it. The title draws you in, and the poem holds its own. A 10. -Lydia

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