Cherish When Alive! Comments
Just half an hour before death.
There lay an old feeble body
With just breathing in
Surrendered with near and dear ones.
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Very touching as well as inspiring.......Geetha......scripted with beautiful words.........like cherish while alive.......
It is said that around the time of death, our past life scrolls back as on a silver screen! May be.. or may not be! We do not know! But if our actions have been good, definitely, we will be able to die in peace! A poem that makes us sit back and think!
A very deep and meaningful poem Geetha. Death comes upon us all when we do not know, but it will come. Having lost both parents and a baby Son I know the feelings very well. But if we only get one life we have to take the good times along with the bad! Lovely poem anyway.
May each of us take a time to look back and see greatly inspire these words, poet!
Great sentiments expressed with inherent depth. May I take the liberty of making a small suggestion. If you start in the present tense, to maintain a better flow - sustain it throughout the poem. Don't change from present to past. Once again a wonderful read. Thank you. Dee
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May each of us get a time to cherish All those moments and enjoy it At least once in our life time May each of us take a time to look back and see. We can cherish as long our soul resides in our body! ....so touching and true. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.