Sunday, January 13, 2008

Cherish Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cherish the moment that I am now living,
I live every day like it will be my last,
Breathing the air that's so pure around me,
The times I remember that go by so fast.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 02 March 2008

To be at one with nature and your surroundings, what bliss.. This is another great write from you Andrew, Thankyou Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 28 February 2008

Captivating. A pleasure to find and a joy to read, like all of yours I have found so far. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Adeline Foster 23 January 2008

This is not half-bad. At first I thought it was developing into a sestina and it almost made it. The living and giving were forgivable. Still pretty good. Adeline

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Sheila Jones 21 January 2008

Awesome work, Andrew!

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Thad Wilk 13 January 2008

A really splendid work of art here Andrew! You are one talented guy! ! *10 plus *! ! ! ! Friend Thad

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Elizabeth T. 13 January 2008

I absolutly love this poem. Life is worth living, and you have clearly expressed that.

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