I cherish the moment that I am now living,
I live every day like it will be my last,
Breathing the air that's so pure around me,
The times I remember that go by so fast.
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Captivating. A pleasure to find and a joy to read, like all of yours I have found so far. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This is not half-bad. At first I thought it was developing into a sestina and it almost made it. The living and giving were forgivable. Still pretty good. Adeline
A really splendid work of art here Andrew! You are one talented guy! ! *10 plus *! ! ! ! Friend Thad
I absolutly love this poem. Life is worth living, and you have clearly expressed that.
To be at one with nature and your surroundings, what bliss.. This is another great write from you Andrew, Thankyou Love duncan X