Wrapped in settling snow from the warm pink
Flakes upon flakes upon patterns and soft geometry
My dad pulls me and sled snow silent
Him the single shape through flake and flake
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ah this brings you another fragment when memories are never ending never fading nice poem fragments will make a person complete and we should always put them together
this is fantastic! the tale is grabbing and well paced. Great poem! tfs 10/10
What a write the transition / switch over is beautifully potrayed.lovely poem.
Lovely piece.