Friday, September 9, 2011

Chells Memory 2 Comments

Rating: 4.0

Wrapped in settling snow from the warm pink
Flakes upon flakes upon patterns and soft geometry
My dad pulls me and sled snow silent
Him the single shape through flake and flake
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michael oliver
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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 April 2012

Lovely piece.

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Jonny Brackney 13 January 2012

this is a wonderful passage.

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Vipins Puthooran 04 October 2011

Noble write.. I like the pace of lines... Great poem

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 09 September 2011

ah this brings you another fragment when memories are never ending never fading nice poem fragments will make a person complete and we should always put them together

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David Beckham 09 September 2011

this is fantastic! the tale is grabbing and well paced. Great poem! tfs 10/10

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Subodh Pandey 09 September 2011

What a write the transition / switch over is beautifully potrayed.lovely poem.

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